Lust, Caution (Se, jie)

Lust, Caution (Se, jie) (色‧戒)

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Lust, Caution (corrected)
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I did a major grammar and spell check. There were a lot of issues with commas and periods. Also, I checked certain usages of words (ex: realise is used outside of North America as well as many other spellings you may find odd.) I think this is more accura

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Yamechapishwa tarehe: 2017-08-05 02:59
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