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This is a story of fiction, created with
some interesting personal experiences of mine and tryst with the time 3:33
I can't bear the pain
Delivery pains is it?
Yes, sir. Baby's legs are protruding out
Mani, bring the stretcher quick.!
Please call my father
Doctor, it's an emergency. The baby's legs are out
What? The legs are out?
God! This is unbearable !!
Oh my God! She is bleeding heavily.
Nurse, get the Operation Theater at once
Ok Doctor
Quick!
Nurse! why is the patient still screaming?
Didn't you give the anesthesia shot?
No Doctor. The baby's position has changed now
There are chances of a normal delivery now
What?
Ma'am, please calm down. The baby’s position keeps changing.
I'm unable to doctor
It might prove fatal to the baby if this continues.
Please, try to control yourself
Ma'am, don't worry. Please bear a little
Ma'am, you are going to see your baby soon
Stay strong. Please push a little
Push a little more, just a bit more
Hold my hands and push harder
Why is the baby still?
Nurse! get the Stethoscope
Yes, sir
Oh shit!
Hey little one, look here...
Baby, wake up!
Nurse, hold the baby upside down.
Ok, Doctor
Excuse me, who accompanied the patient here?
Here I am, Nurse!
Here, it's a boy
Is it? His father would be so happy!
So cute. What a lovely child
Ok, what's the father's name?
Murthy
Mother's Name?
Gayathri
What is the exact time of birth?
Do you know what accompanies a person till the end?
Solitude
Lot of people like it, but I don't
For reasons unknown, it is always after me...
till now
I too have a dream, ambition and desires like everyone
But nothing has materialized till now
In every job interview, they sound very assuring...
but they never call back
I applied for loans to start a business but in vain
All my friends blame it on my ill luck and...
that my time of birth was a bad omen
They say it in a joking manner but it hurts me even more
I feel this solitude is better than that pain
Hello...
Hey Kathir, where are you ?
The truck is here
I'll come, mom
Right now, my only solace...
is my family
Before they lose all faith in me...
I must do something and become successful
Excuse me. Where are you from?
Vadapalani
How many in your family?
Me, my mother, sister and her kid
What's your sister's husband doing?
He is abroad
So, what do you do?
Hey, can't talk with this load, can we talk later?
Chill, just asking since you are new here
Seems to be a hot headed kid
Doesn't even know to respect elders
This generation kids are spoiled
You could have brought the gas cylinder first
Mom, can't you wait for a moment?
He gets irritated for everything
My bladder is bursting here and they just keep ordering me!
Mom, turn off the motor
Alright!
And now this broken lock!
Phew !
What happened?
A crow has it's nest here
Just a nest, right ? I have called someone to clear it
The way you screamed made me startle
Nivya, can you please check?
There is no message uncle, its just the beep
No message?
Wait, I'll check. You eat
Wonder what was that all about?
Who was knocking the door ?
No one, mom
Hey, Devi! It's me, your husband! Open the door!
Mom, it's Perumal!
Oh no! What?
How does he even know this place now?
I don’t know, mom
Where is Kathir ?
Whats your problem now?
Will you solve it, if I tell you?
-Your sister is my problem -Nivya, you go back inside!
Better get lost from here
Send my wife with me and I will leave
Listen, don't create a ruckus here
Get lost from here
-You stay calm! -Keep quite, mom!
Who is creating ruckus here?
I'm you husband and you don't even come with me!
At least you should sign these divorce papers...
but you refuse to do that too!
Instead you're leading a family here...
and you're the one creating problems
How dare you?
Hey! What did you just do?
My God! Look at this !
See that, people?
The whole family is full of murderers!
I wanted to make peace with my wife and take her home...
but instead her brother breaks my head!
Look at this atrocity!
Stop talking like you're a saint !
Don't we all know how you treated my daughter!
Is it? What do you know?
Tell me, what's my fault?
Everywhere, men send their wife back home, demanding more dowry
Have I done anything like that? Tell me
Or like drunkards out there, have I ignored my wife and kid?
You should treat me like a king!
Stop acting. Enough of my daughter suffering with you
Really, were you suffering while living with me?
How can she live with a pervert like you?
Oh no! What kind of a woman are you?
Have you seen a woman like her?
Shameless to share our intimate moments with her brother !!
He's your younger brother and do you...
Welcome miss, she has come at the right time
Do you know her?
She is.. his girlfriend
Let me ask you something
You guys have been dating for so long
Don't tell me he didn't make any moves
-Hey, you are talking too much! -Kathir, leave him
I will kill you !
What do you want? My signature is it?
-I'll sign it! Give me the pen! -Don't shout!
-You dirty scum! -Take your time and sign it properly
-Here! Get lost now! -Thank you
Thank you!
Over. Its all over
Brother, take care of your sister
-Damn it! -Hold on. Enough
What?
Still thinking about it?
Did I blow the issue out of proportion?
That man doesn’t deserve any empathy
Its better for her not to have such a man in her life
Won't you take care of her?
Not that. I was concerned about Nivya
Ok, forget it
Your sister and you have been sulking since I came
You bot are just cribbing over it
Spare a thought for me too
I came here all excited to your new house, with a gift
But you are not even talking to me properly
Ok, what is that gift?
See it for yourself
Here
What's this? It is so heavy !
Just see it!
A clock?
Yes, it is a special clock
Special?
Set a time of your choice...
and you will know why it is special
Hey, what kind of surprise is this?
No, not this. Just wait a moment...
Listen to this
" I love you, my hubby..... I love you"
Torture
" I love you, my sweet heart.... I love you!
Already I got enough problems and on top she does this!
I fixed this tune, but don’t know how it changed
Why do you do all this?
You switch off your phone whenever we quarrel
Who will pacify you then?
That is why, I recorded my voice as a tune
The voice in the clock will calm you down and remind you of me
That's why I got it
Return it if you don't like it
I shall exchange if for something else
It's alright. even if this doesn't pacify me...
at least it'll remind me of you
You say that because I gifted it?
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