The first 163 lines.
Headquarters to all units.
There's fuel leaking from the crushed vehicle
at the site of the traffic accident on the highway.
At the junction of C1 and C2, there was a rear-end collision of four vehicles.
Currently confirming the victims.
There's a risk of fire.
Episode 1: From Today, I Am a Killer
Oh, it's me, Dad.
Yeah. You want to meet up?
What?! Okay, then!
How about at a family restaurant?
What do you say? Huh?
Speaker
Contact
Not sure what he was trying to get at. To be frank, everything was so half-baked. It could have used a tweak or two with the twist.
Halfway through, the ending became obvious, so he could work on that? I hope his next work is better.
It's not thrilling to read. If I could relate to the characters, it might become more interesting?
Not sure what he was trying to get at. To be frank, everything was so half-baked. It could have used a tweak or two with the twist.
Halfway through, the ending became obvious, so he could work on that? I hope his next work is better.
It's not thrilling to read. If I could relate to the characters, it might become more interesting?
Setting, story, plot twists... they're all familiar and there's nothing new. It's the self-indulgent writing of a mystery fan. If you've never read a mystery, you might enjoy it, but you'd be better off reading Edogawa Ranpo.
As other people have posted, I'd say the problem is the lack of originality, but it looks like the ideas have dried up in the mystery genre.
And what have you accomplished, hmm?
The Crime of the Ideal Gas
Introduction:
There was a clear ceiling. In that moment, I knew I was alive. I'm alive? But why? Was there a point to what I did that day? It was too late for me to think about it. My life suddenly came to an end.
Thank you for reading my story. This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to actual persons or organizations are purely coincidental.
Oh, Kajitani-san's latest chapter.
Plot twist notes No. 4
Eiji Kikkawa
Cumulonimbus and Rain
Amazing...
Welcome!
A party of one?
He's totally following a pattern.
But his application of it is excellent.
When did my daughter become a celebrity?
None of your business.
Here you go.
Excuse me, can I get the sirloin steak combo, please?
Coming right up.
So why do you want to come to my apartment?
Because I'm your dad.
Eating curry again?
That stuff makes your belly fat.
Yeah, I know.
Anyhow, why don't you take those off?
We're indoors.
What happened to your face, Reika?
I fell.
How many times?
Huh?
Three times? Four?
Don't tell me... your boyfriend?
I'm leaving!
What?!
No, I'm only kidding!
I'm sorry!
Scratch that! I take it back!
Reika!
Don't go, Reika!
Man, I'm such an obsessive a detective story enthusiast...
Um... Here's your sirloin steak combo...
She told me not to, but I couldn't help it.
That's the story of parenting, I guess.
I don't think she's home yet.
That broad said her old man was coming.
Yo, over here!
You're late, you idiots!
And what did you do with her?
Punched her like five, six times.
Savage!
Serves her right, that bitch.
Jeez, you're evil!
What was her name again?
Huh? It's Reika.
I fell.
And what did you do with her?
Punched her like five, six times.
What was her name again?
Huh? It's Reika.
Reika. Reika?!
Cosplay Peachy Academy
Karaoke Box
How old are those guys?
Hello there!
Looking for one tonight, senpai?
Oh no, I'm not a customer...
Yeah, whatever. Come this way!
What?!
You were following our guys.
What for?
L-Let me go...
S-Someone! Anyone! Help me!
Help! Please!
Tell the police and you know what happens.
There you go.
See you never.
Oh, honey?
Yeah, it's me.
I hurt myself a little bit.
Internet Café
Right, it's not really a big deal.
But it's getting late, so I decided to stay the night at the hospital.
Yeah, I'm fine.
I'll fill you in later.
Oh, Reika was doing great.
Okay then.
Reika, 18 years old
"Tetsuo's Theme"
Composed and Performed by Reika
2 min 14 seconds, 30,000 yen
I'm really sorry, but I sustained an injury.
So I'm afraid I can't come to work today. Right.
She didn't even answer me today.
Even if you know it's coming, a rebellious age is tough.
Maybe the birthday present from her last year was the last one.
Don't worry.
I know she was preparing something.
Reika, 18 years old
"Tetsuo's Theme"
I'm never playing this again, ever.
If you want to hear it again, then you can buy this CD for 30,000 yen.
Reika, 18 years old
"Tetsuo's Theme"
Composed and Performed by Reika
I'll buy it.
Of course I will.
I'm glad I borrowed her spare key.
No one seems to be here.
No men's shoes.
So I'm sure...
I'm sure I'm overthinking it.
Even if...
Even if there is a man involved...
There's no way.
No way it would be a sketchy rando like that—
Snap out of it!
Calm down and only look at the facts!
Ah?
I've already told you, I'm not drunk, damn it.
It'll be fine.
After I milk her as much as I can, I'll dump her right away.
I hear the protection money is no joke, right?
Did my old man say something?
Why do you think I bother with a broad like that?
"Milk her as much as I can"?
"Protection money"?
Oh yeah, obviously. Sure.
I'm totally sorry for what I did, I mean it.
But who knew that was all it took for her to go belly-up?
I only hit her, you know?
Oh, no, no, that's Kazuko.
Kazuko had the factured skull. Yumi had the ruptured organs.
Huh? No, that's totally not it.
No, not at all!
Well, I'm not sure when I'll pop the broad I'm with now.
I'll be in your care when it happens!
I'm kidding! It's a joke!
I'm going for the inheritance from her grandfather.
"Her grandfather"?
Huh? What's that?
Yesterday? We were followed?
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