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OK! Ready Freddy ...
Hm ... Barbie
What am I suppose to paint?
That's up to you.
Me?
But what if I do not have any good ideas?
You have wonderful ideas. Your ideas.
Can not you just tell me what to paint?
And take away the best part?
Kelly, you can created anything you image.
I guest so.
But what if I hate it?
You know
You remind me of a story.
It's about a girl who’s paintings saved her life.
But you probably do not want to here it.
Once, long long ago,
In a time of castles, king, and magic.
There was a secret manner hidden deep in a dark forest.
The woods were whispered to be full of monsters and dragons.
Even if you were brave enough to go in to the forest, ...
you couldn't see the manner.
Why not?
It was concealed behind a magic wall.
Which keep intruders out.
And more importantly, keep a young girl hidden inside.
Do you hear that Rapunzel?
My stomach rumbling.
I feel weak.
I see them, stars in front of me eyes!
OK, OK Hobie
We wouldn't want anyone fainting around here.
I'm Almost done.
Look at this.
I mean, look at this painting.
I can smell the saltwater.
I Can Feel the mist.
One day, I'm going to walk along the beach
just like this one. And see nothing but open sky
For miles and miles.
Ah oh! Gothel alert!
GOTHEL ALERT!
Go Rapunzel, go. I'll put your art stuff away.
Thanks, Penelope.
How was your ride today my lady?
Invigorating.
I'll expect my tea in 9 minutes.
Yes, my lady.
Do not you repeat errors of yesterday.
You steam that tea for 6 minutes
I expect six and a half minutes, no more no less.
Eh ... Of coarse.
And bring me a snack.
Oh!, your little friend will do.
What's That?
Ah!
Painting again!
What about your duties
I ... I finished them.
Oh really?
Did you make the beds?
Sweep the floors?
Weed the garden?
Yes.
Beat the rugs?
Wax the tables?
Polish the silver?
Yes me lady.
Wash and mend my clothes?
Folded and put away.
Listen to that ...
Your suppose to keep the house in perfect order.
I do not know about ... It's you job to know.
I've taken care of you sense you were a baby
and this is how you thank me?
By frittering away you time,
Painting.
Such trivia’s.
I hope Gothel chokes on her tea.
Now, Hobie.
Wait, wait, I can do it faster.
Just Be very, very careful, Penelope.
Oh.
Nice job.
Oh, no!
I got this!
Do not think it's a quieter.
Where's the tea cup?
Oh, no, that's down right Spooky!
What!
You do not think I got Moved.
Cause I got moves.
But.
Turn around purple girl.
Well scratch my scales...
I wonder where it goes?
Hello, what about Gothel's tea?
We still have a few minutes.
Come on. Something great could be down here.
Ah, yea, shure. Looks very inviting.
Eh .. you don't think there are spiders down there?
cause I'm not to fond of spiders...
or ... or beetles. or snakes, I don't like them ether.
Your worried about bugs and snakes?
What about what Gothel will do to us?
If she finds out we went down there.
Da, for sure, oh yea, let's go anyway.
No one ever listens to the rabbit.
Nobody's been down here in years.
I can't imagine Gothel attending all these balls.
Can I ask you,
who in their right mine would invite her to a party?
Would you look at this?
Oh, she sure got mad at somebody.
I wouldn't want to be in his boots.
Or his head.
What a lovely old box.
Not down here, Penelope.
I'm OK.
It's beautiful.
There's something engraved on the back.
Constant as the stars above.
Always know that you are loved.
To our daughter, Rapunzel on her first birthday ...
With love forever, mother and father.
This doesn't make sense.
Gothel said I was abandoned ...
when I was just a few days old.
Why would she lie to be about that?
Why do the old hag do anything other then to torment people?
With love forever.
More junk holders.
You really pack a wallop.
Rapunzel.
Oh boy, oh boy, hurry get cleaning.
Rapunzel!
Where are you?
We'll have to come back.
Coming, my lady!
Enter.
What took you so long?
I'm sorry, I was distracted.
Lazy you mean.
Adequate.
Oh.. time! time! time!
My mistress is ready for her beauty nap.
Step to it girl.
Will there be anything else?
No.
Go.
Don’t disturb me until dinner.
Yes my lady.
Allow me mistress.
This doesn’t make sense. Why would Gothel...
I'll tell you what Gothel up to.
What?
No good, that's what.
Thank you, that's very helpful.
Oh! I see a very big hairy spider.
Kidding.
Happy?
How we going to fix this?
Don’t worry, we'll think of something.
That's funny?
A draft.
The tunnel must lead somewhere.
Maybe this isn’t a good idea.
Now there's the understatement of the seventeen century.
Plus there's probably bugs. Lots of bugs.
But I've never been outside the magic wall.
This is my chance. Maybe my only chance.
I'm going.
OK! Count me in.
This isn’t going the way I planned.
Sorry! Rapunzel.
You couldn't fall six inches to the left?
Next time, I'll seated on you.
What about you, Hobie?
Me? Down there?
Well I..I'd better stay here with Penelope.
Somebody gotta keep her out of trouble.
OK, I'll be back soon.
We'll be here.
Worrying.
I don't believe it.
Goo...Good morning, Miss.
No, thank you.
What if she's lost?
Boy!
Or in trouble?
Watch it with that thing.
What if she's trapped alone, ...
facing a wild ferocious beast?
Or worse: What if Gothel wakes up before her comes back?
Hobie, what do you hear?
Anything? Is she coming?
I'm getting, I'm getting,
nothing.
Maybe if you move my right ear down a notch?
How's that?
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